shines through

doors are open wide
on the boxcars as they pass …
setting sun shines through


2 thoughts on “shines through

    • Sarah, your positive comments are very much appreciated! :)

      Perhaps you need to take a little credit for this one. After your previous comment, I was reminded of this image from many years ago. I think that a haiku may be a combination of an experience plus the mental conception and/or memory…

      Filter this through the haiku structure and sometimes the real haiku magic happens. Still there are the mysterious factors, spiritual factors… whatever they may be called.

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