honest breathing

evening sun burns hot
too hot for honest breathing …
inhale at midnight

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8 thoughts on “honest breathing

  1. Pingback: deep breaths « Samantha Mariah Jane

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  3. Well, I’m so glad I penned this haiku. It inspired such a nice poem from Samantha!

    Wasn’t expecting that, but it’s a cool, one day before my birthday present… :)

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